Possibly don't use the word 'common'. Try down-market consumer? I see evidence of guide on front of Look. Watch your capital letters... e.g. 'there' Lots of variety of type and shapes of ornamentation Colour scheme utilizes primary colours
First sentence of second slide is way too long. Use of grid. ON the whole, great second slide :)
Remainder fo the analysis gets even better.
Some description without analysis and sometimes without the use of Graphics terms, but generally sound.
Possibly don't use the word 'common'. Try down-market consumer?
ReplyDeleteI see evidence of guide on front of Look.
Watch your capital letters... e.g. 'there'
Lots of variety of type and shapes of ornamentation
Colour scheme utilizes primary colours
First sentence of second slide is way too long.
Use of grid.
ON the whole, great second slide :)
Remainder fo the analysis gets even better.
Some description without analysis and sometimes without the use of Graphics terms, but generally sound.
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